Pack AI prompt · ChatGPT · Claude · Gemini

Conversion critique and A/B test plan

Get a blunt, structured review of a landing page draft from a skeptical-visitor perspective, a rewrite of the weakest sections, and a prioritized list of tests to run.

Task: critiquing landing page copy for conversionBest in: ChatGPTFormat: 3-step sequencePack: Landing page copy, section by section

What you'll fill in

  • [page copy] The full landing page copy (yours or a draft from this pack) e.g. “[HERO] Shopify bookkeeping, done every week...”
  • [audience] Who the page is for e.g. “Shopify store owners doing $10k-$80k/month”
  • [traffic source] Where visitors come from, since that changes what they already know e.g. “Meta ads targeting Shopify store owners; cold traffic”

The prompt

3-step prompt sequenceIn the Landing page copy, section by section pack

The full prompt (3 steps) is included in the pack.

Get the pack — $14

Steps: Step 1 — Skeptical visitor review → Step 2 — Fix the weakest sections → Step 3 — Test plan

How to use it

  1. Open a new chat in ChatGPT (the others work too).
  2. Paste step 1 and replace every [bracket] with your details.
  3. When it replies, paste the next step in the same chat.
  4. Review the output, check any facts, and edit to taste.

Why ChatGPT: ChatGPT gives direct, structured critiques; asking Claude for the same review is a useful second opinion.

Tips

3 tips for this prompt come with the pack.

Example output

Reviewer 1 (skeptical store owner from a Meta ad): - Hero: Clear. I get it's bookkeeping for Shopify. "$249" is good to see upfront. - Problem: The 11pm line is me. Kept reading. - Benefits: "Answers in Slack" — is that a real person or a bot? - Proof: One quote, and two obvious gaps. Feels thin. - FAQ: Still don't know if they handle Amazon, which I also sell on. - End: I'd probably bookmark it, not book a call yet.

Preview of the example output. The full example comes with the pack.

Try a free prompt from the same pack

Landing page message brief (interview mode)

Start here. The AI interviews you about your offer, audience and objections, then compiles a one-page message brief that every later prompt in the pack builds on.

Step 1 — Get interviewed
You are a senior conversion copywriter preparing to write a landing page. Before writing any copy, you need a clear message brief.

Here is what I have so far:
- Offer: [offer]
- Audience: [audience]
- The one action I want visitors to take: [page goal]
- Raw notes: [raw notes]

Interview me to fill the gaps. Ask me up to 10 questions, one short numbered list, covering:
1. The specific moment or trigger that makes someone go looking for this.
2. What they have tried before and why it disappointed them.
3. The top 3 outcomes they actually want (in their words, not ours).
4. The top 3 objections or fears that stop them from acting.
5. What makes this offer different from the obvious alternatives (including doing nothing).
6. What proof I genuinely have: testimonials, numbers, case studies, guarantees, credentials.
7. Price, risk reversal and what happens right after they click.

Skip any question my notes already answer, and tell me which ones you skipped. Do not write any landing page copy yet.
Step 2 — Compile the brief
Thanks. Using my answers above plus the original notes, compile a one-page landing page message brief with these headings:

- Audience in one sentence (who, situation, trigger)
- Core promise (one sentence, concrete outcome, no hype words)
- Top 3 desired outcomes (customer language, quoted where I gave you real phrases)
- Top 3 objections and the honest answer to each
- Differentiators vs. alternatives (including doing nothing)
- Proof inventory: list ONLY the proof I actually gave you; mark gaps as [NEED PROOF: ...]
- Offer details: price, what is included, risk reversal, next step after the click
- Words to use / words to avoid
- Open questions I still need to answer

Keep it under 450 words. Flag anything you inferred rather than heard from me with "(assumption)". This brief will be pasted into every later prompt, so make it scannable.

FAQ

Does this prompt work in ChatGPT, Claude and Gemini?

Yes. It is plain-language and written to work in all three. Best fit: ChatGPT. ChatGPT gives direct, structured critiques; asking Claude for the same review is a useful second opinion.

What do I need to fill in?

Replace each bracket with your own details: [page copy], [audience], [traffic source]. The more specific your input, the more useful the result.

Is this prompt free?

It is part of the Landing page copy, section by section pack ($14, one-time), which includes 8 prompts. The $59 All-Access Bundle includes every pack.

Will I get the same result as the example?

No. The example was made for a fictional business to show the shape and quality of the output. Your result depends on your input and the model, so review and edit before you use it.

Do I need a paid AI plan?

Usually not. Free plans handle most prompts. Paid plans help when you paste in long documents or run a long multi-step sequence in one chat.

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Landing page message brief (interview mode)

Start here. The AI interviews you about your offer, audience and objections, then compiles a one-page message brief that every later prompt in the pack builds on.